In respond to feedback

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In  responce to feedback from my teacher others I understound that i need to follow convenctions more. A good way to do this would be haveing a music magazine next to me when creating my own, I could lay it out in similar way and get inspiration from other convenctions.

Peer Feedback on Contents page.

The use of original images is good. Your text is clear and easy to read. the page is not distracting in any way. Therefore, all information is clear and understood.

I think you could use some colour or a pattern/texture in the background To create some depth in the page.

Luke Hallett.

Peer feedback
Your contents page colours look very effective and stand out and you stuck to the coventional 3 colours.
Your numbers could stand out more down the side of the page

3rd Content Page Draft

2nd Content Page Draft

1st Content Page Draft