Lucy Richmond
Your blog is good and fits the genre you have chosen. It
looks like a lot of work has gone into the blog and you have done some extra
work such as behind the scene videos of photo shoots and make tutorial videos
which shows you have put some extra effort into your work
Strengths: your front cover is very good and follows the
conventions of a magazine. It looks realistic and like something you would find
in a shop. It also fits with the genre of music you have chosen.
Areas for improvement: You could maybe make the masthead
slightly bigger so that it stands out more. You could also make some of the
features bigger to fill in some gaps.
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